EncounterWriting

Hello! I know I have not been very active but if I were to begin writing again would anyone be able to give me constructive criticism on the stories?

Ninjawhovian05

Hey can u guess who I am? I'll give you a hint: PERCABETH GENDER BEND.
          Okay, I'll give you another hint: J'aime beaucoup votre frère.
          Last hint: Ich mag Kinder essen.
          I lied. This is the last hint: I know you. You're my BFFF according to Dear Reginald.
          Hope you read my fanfics!