EndoNike

Guess who just got top surgery 

Hi Endo I don’t know if you like constructive criticism or not but I have some for you if you want it!! It’s mainly focused on your dip story. I feel like in ‘Heaven In Hell’, you wrote Pip as a petite, innocent guy that didn’t know all that much about sex or in this case, sodomites. I also feel like you stuck to both Pip and Damien’s more childlike characters. Also I’m aware that Pip died at age eight/nine so I know that he wouldn’t know all that much about intercourse, but it still bugged me how he was so… whiny? I don’t know how to describe it. He just seemed to not know all that much and you perceived it like he had no idea what genitals were. For example I just feel like an 18-19 year old angel wouldn’t blush and whimper at having his wings touched, even if they’re erogenous. I feel like you could’ve focused more on how different he was now he had been brainwashed by God, and maybe you could’ve thrown in some sort of aggressive reaction to Damien wrongly speaking about God, or maybe he speaks in a prissy manner that grates on Damien’s nerves. ANOTHER THING. I feel like Damien wouldn’t have matured and calmed down all that much, and had dwelled on the past and Pip’s death. I feel like instead of immediately falling in love with Pip, he would’ve been angry and aggressive towards Pip, but gradually getting used to having the other guy around. I always perceived Damien (especially while being around 18-19) as being blunt and honestly quite rude- like he never moved on from the death or someone he vaguely considered a friend. Obviously it’s not at all my place to speak about this, and if I have such strong opinions on a Wattpad story then maybe I need to get out and get a social life. But just to let you know I really love your stories ‍↔️.

hi! jst wanna let u know I love your books dude they're so good! love the creek hero one and the battle of the bands one especially!

Pookie we miss you

hi endonike ive been reading your fics since 2023 !!! ive always loved your writing style and the way youve portrayed the south park characters,, if possible, i would love to see you write a story about pip and gregory !! its fine if you cant come up with any ideas for one, considering gregory has barely any scenes in the south park movie and the two have never interacted, this is just a favorite southpark rarepair of mine!! :))

I will post something on September 19th. 

boo

Endo, you're so kewl

In your style story, who's top stan or kyle?

I am waiting oh so patiently for the princess Kenny fic (I'm lying. I'm tweaking out dude- I'll give you a kiss if you leak it to me rn)