layxwn

Hi! I'm a new writer to the field in terms of kpop stories.
          I've been an official stan since 2020 but never thought
          about writing stories about them. This is my first story
          kpop related and in english as well (as I'm an english and another language native speaker but never wrote an english story before). Could you please check it out? I'Il really appreciate some support from fellows writers and even some feedbacks.
          Thank you very much!
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/349212751?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=layxwn

Engenielife

@layxwn 
            Anytime :)
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layxwn

@Engenielife Thank you very much! I was going for a different style, so I'm glad you noticed. I'll listen to your feedback and will try using this method instead of writing directly on wattpad. Your reply made me soooo much happyㅠ-ㅠ
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Engenielife

@Engenielife 
            From what I've read, I love the detail and mood of the story as well as its smooth progression. I did notice several grammar and homophone errors but that's easily solvable if you write your story on a separate Word document first and then transfer it over instead of writing on wattpad. This is as Word's editing is probably more accurate than Grammarly's. Overall, I find your story interesting and it's going pretty well. Keep it up!
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