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Can yoh follow me pls?
EnhiveJangkku
Baekkuuuland_
Hiii ! Just wanted to tell u that I read ur story ; it's cute, the plot/storyline is nice. But since u asked for my opinion, here I am :D
!! I don't wanna sound rude or anything !!
The ONLY thing that needs adjustment is the English.
Bcoz, u see... to keep ur readers interested, u have to communicate the (ur) idea and intent clearly to them
If English isn't ur 1st language, u could always use some help, it's okay :)
For example, u could use Google translate. And if u sometimes find Google's words boring and dull, u could use a helping hand, for example friends, and if u want I would be glad to help, don't be shy to ask me if u need help writing ^^
Also if u want, u can simply and easily copy paste ur chapters and ask chat gpt to correct all the mistakes and write it in a more exciting way
EnhiveJangkku
Can you guys give me Korean names reccomandation cuz I'm writing a story ( not a ff)
EnhiveJangkku
Yall I haven't been updating because my school so I'll star updating tmr
Baekkuuuland_
Hii ! I will start working on your request soon, but please... I hope you complete the payment before so I can start :)
Ty for your cooperation ☆