The key to becoming a successful writer is to accept criticism. So, I would love to hear your opinion on how I could improve my writing.
Favorite quotes:
"The price of freedom is high and it's the price I'm willing to pay." - Steve Rodgers
"You could inspire people in a way I never could."- Oliver Queen
"Those who love us never really leave us. You can always find them in here." - Sirius Black
"WE'VE ALL GOT BOTH LIGHT AND DARK INSIDE US. WHAT MATTER IS THE PART WE CHOOSE TO ACT ON. THAT'S WHO WE REALLY ARE."-Sirius Black
"Stop waiting for the storm to pass and learn to dance in the rain."
"Silence is golden, but when you have kids, silence is suspicious."
The Phoenix Trilogy:
1: Out of Time (complete)
2: History Repeats Itself ( Hiatus)
3: Living In His Shadow (TBA)
Alternate ending to Out of Time- Broken (Yancy Becket) (currently writing)
Other books:
Destiny(Hiatus)
Shattered (Slow Updates)
Following
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Stories by Rita Brooks
Broken (Yancy Becket)
Broken. That's how Iris Potter felt. She thought being sent back in time and saving everyone would be great...
Destiny(Hiatus)
After being bitten by a radioactive spider, the last thing Peter Parker expected was to suddenly have magical...
Shattered (Slow updates)
Elizabeth Prewett hadn't had the easiest childhood. Growing up in the home of Gideon Prewett wasn't a walk in...