After a super long wait, Chapter 3 of Realm of Dreams is finally up! Thank you to everyone who has encouraged me to keep writing. Your comments are greatly appreciated<3
After a super long wait, Chapter 3 of Realm of Dreams is finally up! Thank you to everyone who has encouraged me to keep writing. Your comments are greatly appreciated<3
Hello Emily~~Your first posting of a story is impressive! I like the premise and situation you set up for the reader initially. Your use of language is very good and you have a keen eye for sensory details--so far I think that is your strength.
Take a look at the way I establish place and the quest of the protagonist in my opening chapters of "The Vampiress of Mykonos"
http://www.wattpad.com/story/17542809-the-vampiress-of-mykonos
Happy to report that this story now sits at #4 on the "Hot" List for Vampires/Historical Fiction.
And for a quick development of erotic interests among characters (did she say erotic?--Read only if you are a big girl) check out this very simplistic but meteorically popular:
"A Walk in the Countryside"
http://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside
All the best in your WP writing career--and beyond!
~~Califia