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Considering about revising Chapter 1 again for Striking Chances. Not a massive edit or anything but I am thinking about removing Thea’s song. It just feels so out of place lowkey and it doesn’t really provide much relevance to the story (or even as a fun way to show off Disharming Voice), but at least the concept of it can still be found on the draft version of the story on Ao3.
Another consideration is also taking out some of the vulgar words the characters may say. I don’t have that big of an issue with it personally, especially since foul-language warning I’ve implemented but I’m sure some people don’t really like the idea of talking pokémon cursing from a franchise like this, even though in a sense it feels a bit realistic but uncanny lol. It is an idea that I’m already implementing in the next chapter (spoiler oop?). The only exceptions to this change though are words like “bitch/bastard/pussy”. Obviously they won’t be used very often but I chose to pick these words for a specific reason and also these words weren’t originally intended to be vulgar to society before.
Anyway, Chapter 8 is halfway or over halfway done and so far it’s going smoothly! I reckon it could very well be ready next week if not two but don’t quote me.
I also wanna assure folks that even if I fall into a writer’s block or out of the pokémon fandom for awhile, I will not ever consider discontinuing the book as I’ve planned this for years and I feel very passionate about writing as a hobby, bringing life to my characters and etc. I won’t let it have the same fate as DT! But any of what I mentioned could happen but I doubt it will for while!
Thanks for reading! Have a good day! :3