EnlightenedFool
Dunno if anyone is reading this (and I was pretty much afk from this site for a while) but I just finished book 2 of PTS (Pulling The Strings). It is very different from the first story (trust me). I would be glad to have people read it and give me feedback so I can improve for future books (if any tbh).
EnlightenedFool
True I made that part like, last year. I probably should've revisited some things to make it flow more
JackassJames
@EnlightenedFool the change from village to massive kingdom could've used some more buildup
