EnterTheVoid78

What name would you prefer for Aelor’s dragon?
          	
          	Comment your ideas below and the one that gets the most upvotes wins.

IsaiahWarner7

@EnterTheVoid78 if not an OC dragon then vermithor
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IsaiahWarner7

@EnterTheVoid78 arrax
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EnterTheVoid78

Okay, what about making use of a riderless dragon
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IsaiahWarner7

You should continue the crimson king, it's such a deeper premise than with canon. Rhaenyra's brother(half) aegon was born and he wasn't heir, he wasn't raised or brought up thinking he was the heir, so rhaenyra being heir wasn't a bad thing for him because he had nothing "taken" from him. But this guy your OC was raised thinking he was the heir, he grew up thinking he was going to be king. Only for his father to make his older sister heir. That, that is a story

EnterTheVoid78

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EnterTheVoid78

This is interesting do you want to discuss this idea on discord or another platform
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IsaiahWarner7

Wait, I read the premise. But then read the first chapter and it's nothing alike. The birth seems like your setting it up to be a rival twins story(that's already being done in another on going story. Involving viserys having twin sons) but what I said above could be a story. Rhaenyra is 14 in season one, her younger brother could be 10. But when aemma died Viserys feels guilty about pushing for more sons, so he feels by making rhaenyra heir he's honoring her.....but he just changed up his only sons entire world.
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EnterTheVoid78

What name would you prefer for Aelor’s dragon?
          
          Comment your ideas below and the one that gets the most upvotes wins.

IsaiahWarner7

@EnterTheVoid78 if not an OC dragon then vermithor
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IsaiahWarner7

@EnterTheVoid78 arrax
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EnterTheVoid78

Okay, what about making use of a riderless dragon
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SPARTANOFDEATH2001

@EnterTheViod78 hey just found your profile I’m really hoping that the A stag Not A Dragon story is being continued also will that story follow the events of the show and who is the love interest or interests

EnterTheVoid78

Perhaps I am looking to get back into writing after such a long break :)
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SPARTANOFDEATH2001

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Iam_LewaKulture

Hi there.
          Hope you're doing well.
          
          I must say your book The People's Prince is so good. I love your writing skills, the way you use vocabularies, you write  just like George R Martin Fire and Blood. I am loving the plot and the description. You're amazing. Xoxo

EnterTheVoid78

Hello, everyone.
          
          It’s been a week since I first published my first fan fiction. Thank you to everyone who has read the story so far along with those who have voted for the story.
          
          I would like to improve my writing and was wondering if I could get some feedback and what has gone well so far and what I could improve.