Ian

Latest work is up, do appreciate a good read :)

You are welcome, I am glad you appreciate the honest review. Now hearing what you said, that's pretty interesting, I used to think it was a poem about two or three people.
          
          And yes you are right, since there are different characters in different scenes, you will need to instill an identity into them, like "fiance" and "fiancee", "soldier", "thief", "assassin" etc.  

Hi!:) I wanted to thank you for being honest with me on my poem. I truly needed it. What I was trying to go for was little clips of different people. Having the photographer take pictures of different scenes. Do you think I would need to have a better description of each character rather than saying "he" or "she" for a reader to understand it better? 
          
          thanks again!:)