@ThomsanAniman I got some criticisms which were kind of valid. Such as my OC, Esora's cheat being too OP, the beginning of the fanfic being a copy of the main plot with just Esora added in and other stuff that isn't important.
I'm just gonna be rewriting some chapters to have proper grammar, adding to Esora's charactet, maybe add some scenes and maybe add more OCs (just two).