EraserHead

 Came from a mha fic...I'll just go now...

I feel bad for how many times you get spammed in some MHA ChatFics

Ah, so an Eraserhead @ does exist. Good day, happy New Year.

@I-ate-narnia I'll wait until several more chapters are up, cuz I read things in mass. It's more enjoyable (x
          and, ahh, i kinda missed WattPad while the site was down.
          
          I get really mad yet amused at the stories on here and then i feel the need to tell my friend and she just laughs at me -.-

@EraserHead It's fine, I just had to explain some things. 
          Thank you for that. I really like constructive criticism. You've given me the impetus to start editing Tiger, Tiger as I go and I will be adding extra chapters too, explaining some of the things you pointed out and giving Alexander and Rose more time to bond with Alexis. You were right, it was rushed and I hated how I wrote it! :L 
          Yup, you're right. My story is nowhere near a masterpiece, but there has been a bit of a lack of creativity on here. My friend and I were laughing over the fact that there are 6 pages with the word 'Player' in the title or description. Yawn! I'll have to check FictionPress out. There are some fantabulous stories on here, but a large portion are not! 
          We should. Any comments on Tiger's Eye you have, let me know. You really helped me to see some major points for improvement. That's one of the reasons I'm here :) 
          I get what you mean anyway :)

@I-ate-narnia Hey, I didn't mean to hurt your feelings because it was pretty enjoyable to read (: I swear on my life. And haha kinda, but I mention that with everyone. I commented because I truly think that you're a good writer. Hahah, your stories are perfectly fun. If it makes you feel better, your's was one of the few stories I actually finished reading on here. I don't know if many people noticed, but the stories on here aren't exactly what they used to be. It's like all creativity just got eaten up by some idea demons or something. I'm mostly on FictionPress for reading purposes, while sometimes going on here occasionally. You should check it out. The stories are AMAZING. I almost cried. And it's easier to filter.
          
          And I'd love to read whatever it is you write in the future. And it's perfectly fine being defensive over something that's important to you. 
          
          Ohh, and you idea was original, just sayin (; And the whole testing thing, I recently did a persuasive essay on animal testing and it was like "HOLY CRAP! Freakyyy." haha.
          
          We should be friends. I'm not usually inconsiderate... but some people think I'm insensitive, but it's just how it is (: I just totally contradicted myself but it's all gooood (:

I'm going to try and use a metaphor to describe the controller thing :L If you have a control that works with two televisions, and you place one television infront of the other, you will block the signal to the one behind. Don't feel I'm belittling you, it's the only way I can think to describe it.
           Your opinion really matters to me and you pointed out some ace areas of improvement with the rushing and explanation of pack ranking, which I plan to edit A.S.A.P. Maybe I'm being too defensive and ranty, but I just had to explain what I thought about some of your comments. 
          I have taken everything you said into consideration, a lot was good criticism. But you did kinda crush me in one fell swoop, I'm here to improve but also to have fun.
          I would like to hear what you think of the sequel, and when I have time there are large sections of Tiger, Tiger I would like to rewrite. Thank you, and did you mention that because you think I have a British accent? :)

Hello, thank you for your message. I read your bio, and maybe it's because Tiger, Tiger is my baby, and I appreciate an honest opinion to help me learn, but it felt like you really tore into me! :L
          I very much agree with your comment that Tiger, Tiger felt rushed. I have a bad habit of speeding through important parts of the plot, and I plan to go back and build upon my groundwork. 
          Maybe Lilith was insignificant, but I wanted a way to show that Alexis could be treated cruelly. Many of the other shifters and weres are there because the scientists had stolen others, and a pack recquires numbers. I needed to show interaction between Alexis and the pack members.
          The Rose issue I do, however, agree with mostly. I think that they could have had more time to bond (another rushed main part), but sometimes you meet people you instantly like and Alexis and Rose bonded over common problems of isolation and bullying. The friendship between Alexis, Camille and Sally wasn't as rushed, I don't think. People group togther in difficult situations. 
          The two points about Alexis and Alexander. One I agree with wholly, the other not as much. The point about the rushing: true. I hate the way I wrote their admitting their feelings, I desperately want to rewrite it soon. The bit about the love being a little unbelievable, I did explain in the story. My idea of mates I that there are so few shifters and weres, you are instantly signalled to the most compatible person possible. Therefore the perfect match for her is Alexander, so she is instantly "attracted".  I did put in the story that Alexis is very wary of him to begin with, despite them being mates, but warms to him and even Alexander isn't sure if it's real love or not.
          Some people were confused by the "pack ranking", I guess I forgot that people may not know about it. I'm sorry I didn't include a better description. Thank you for pointing it out and I will go back and add more explanation.