Love5122003
Hi
when will you update the next part?
toxicFox3
@Erenshaie ooh . ... Grammar is something I hve work on (hehe) .....I tried first time crime story ... Thank you for your review I will work on it
Erenshaie
@toxicFox3 yeah of course I can tell you...... You know as for fanfictions i only like to have them all related to series or original storyline or novels....... As your precious fanfic which was Death but Pretty i guess..... It has a nice storyline and I really liked it..... But in this present work of yours you have just left the original thing that mentioned in the story....... Although it still a crime story thing but don't have the dominant vibes so that's why after reading only 1 chapter i found myself unable to continue...... As I don't have any objection towards your work so whatever you've started just complete it and give a new start in future...... I'll surely look forward to it...... And also if you can focus on grammar then it will be better much although it doesn't matter if you won't do it but by working on it will make it more understandable....... Thank you for accepting my thoughts...... Best wishes....... ( ◜‿◝ )♡
toxicFox3
@Erenshaie can you more specify what you don't like that I can improve in future