Erevan99

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          	**“Where’s the person who commented on my story first?
          	Hey, I’ve been looking for you.
          	Did the new chapter not sit well with you?
          	If so, do let me know.
          	
          	I’ll be waiting for your comment.”**
          	
          	
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Erevan99

@Shenuli1111  **“Hey, it’s nothing like that.
          	  You’re a thoughtful girl with a good sense of meaning and communication.
          	  I just think you got caught up in something for a moment.
          	  
          	  And really, there’s only one thing for us to do — we should both try to improve the way we communicate.
          	  When you think about it, we’re in the same boat.
          	  Sometimes our communication just gets a bit tangled.”**
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Shenuli1111

@Erevan99 Did I distracted you again... Actually I have to say... My communication skills are very poor...
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Erevan99

@Shenuli1111  ---
          	  
          	  **“I was honestly very happy to see your comment.
          	  But I must admit, when I noticed that you had only voted without commenting, I felt a bit disheartened. For a moment, I wondered whether the new chapter hadn’t quite worked for you.
          	  But now I realise I was mistaken.
          	  
          	  Still, I posted the update and waited for your comment, because I knew how eagerly you had been looking forward to the new chapter.
          	  
          	  In any case, I truly wish that your heart finds peace, and that better days reach you soon.
          	  
          	  So then… I’ll see you on the 28th.
          	  And thank you — sincerely — for explaining things to me.”**
          	  
          	  
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Erevan99

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          **“Where’s the person who commented on my story first?
          Hey, I’ve been looking for you.
          Did the new chapter not sit well with you?
          If so, do let me know.
          
          I’ll be waiting for your comment.”**
          
          
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Erevan99

@Shenuli1111  **“Hey, it’s nothing like that.
            You’re a thoughtful girl with a good sense of meaning and communication.
            I just think you got caught up in something for a moment.
            
            And really, there’s only one thing for us to do — we should both try to improve the way we communicate.
            When you think about it, we’re in the same boat.
            Sometimes our communication just gets a bit tangled.”**
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Shenuli1111

@Erevan99 Did I distracted you again... Actually I have to say... My communication skills are very poor...
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Erevan99

@Shenuli1111  ---
            
            **“I was honestly very happy to see your comment.
            But I must admit, when I noticed that you had only voted without commenting, I felt a bit disheartened. For a moment, I wondered whether the new chapter hadn’t quite worked for you.
            But now I realise I was mistaken.
            
            Still, I posted the update and waited for your comment, because I knew how eagerly you had been looking forward to the new chapter.
            
            In any case, I truly wish that your heart finds peace, and that better days reach you soon.
            
            So then… I’ll see you on the 28th.
            And thank you — sincerely — for explaining things to me.”**
            
            
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Erevan99

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          **“How did you find the new chapter?
          I hope it met your expectations and suited your reading preferences.
          I believe you may appreciate the direction in which the story is developing.
          
          Please do share your thoughts with me — I would truly value your opinion on the new chapter.”**
          
          
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Erevan99

A few minor changes have been made to the second part of the early chapters of THE RED MARSK. Feel free to read it again and enjoy it as you like.
          
                                ____ Erevan Kaelith
          
          
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