ErietriyaMoon

Hello open for vtv? Rtr? Ftf?

Hello open for vtv? Rtr? Ftf?

Hi! Sorry for the little plug, but I have a book club and we're looking for members! 
          
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          We also offer monthly awards, recognition, and exciting rewards! 
          
          If you're interested, feel free to check the link below. Writers and readers are both welcome! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/189236396?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Eilselm_

Hii, follow back, thank you!  

Thanks for the critique. I actually have trouble with descriptive and narrative writing. Can you give me some tips?

Hi.
          I'm finally done with the five chapters. I like your story and here are a few things you can work on to make your writing hit harder.
          
          1. The big moments are revealed too fast.
          After Nimfya's confrontation with her mama she immediately meets drunkards.
          
          So you should add one moment where Nimfya has some time to herself before getting attacked.
          
          2. Then Nimrod, WHY he's so cold to Nimfa specifically. Is it jealousy? Resentment? Protectiveness? 
          
          I need to know!!!
          
          You're very talented and you carry on with this good work!

Sorry for shamelessly plugging po! just wanna promote my story thanks for your consideration 
          
          Title: Redemption Of Krilee Lein
          Genre: Romance, comedy, fantasy, and action. 
          Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/410877458?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=kelansay

Read to read?
          
          Dito na kayo mga maree
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/411130764

V4V?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/404803190?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=ChaoticSagaUniverse

Vtv??