@ Dreamcraft2478 I mean the whole plot of your fanfiction, I just think It's a pretty cool concept and the way u potraited it is just really awesome and interesting to read haha ^^
I'm always interested in historys with OCs but lately finding a good one was getting complicated, specially cote where generaly fanfictions are just Kiyo acting in a different way.
So yeah, I'm just basicly saying that I really liked ur fanfic Lol sorry If I don't explain myself correct, my english writing sucks a bit xD