I have rewritten and published Chapter 8. It is better written, almost three times as long, and I hope you guys like it for the better. That chapter has been the one that has gotten the most criticism, so for the rewrite portion of this story I decided to start there. I am going to do this with all of my chapters and start at the beginning now, and every time I upload a rewrite the bottom of the chapter will say REWRITE. If anyone wants to read chapter 8 again and give me feedback that would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.