@UnknownFlare , I've check your story ! Its comical and really gets me attracted to read more.It's actually a good start for you.I think you're even better than me ! Oh and for the cover of your stories,you mentioned on your first chapter that you're unsatisfied with it ? You could use this app I always use for my stories;its called Pixlr.There's a variety of fonts you could use for your book covers.There's also filters you could use to brighten or darken it.You could make your book covers look more interesting to the readers.Its really useful to be use when editing your pictures.Thank you for sending me a message.I'll be sure to continue reading your stories ! They're really captivating ! :)