@December1314 I actually have another account that I write on more frequently and my books there are more recent. My writing improved after I sort of switched to the other account, so I do find the stories on this account to be a bit bad. In the story you've begun to read, there are only 1000 words per chapter where I have written anywhere from 2,000-2,915 words in the chapters of my new books that are much longer. Also, my technique has improved and my plot has been better developed. Thank you for reading and voting though!