Eshureader

Okay... I will try to work on your advice and make book better,
          	   thanks to give me  you time it's really helpful for me as I don't have much knowledge about writing and book 
          	  Thank you so much to guide me ☺️

@Eshureader Okay so i read a chapter and your writing is quite Good. The only thing i can say is Do not expect much response from readers yet because most of them are just silent ones. When your story will grow more, you will get your own actual active readers instead of passersby ones. For now, keep working on the story you are enjoying to write, keep the main focus on the actual couple, do not make a Mob of too many big incidents and many people. 
          	  
          	  See, Firstly you have to attract Yoonkook lovers through your story because the story is about them. They are your characters and your audience will be coming for Yoonkook. 
          	  
          	  And if response was good before and not now then go back to that type of writing and scenes because that’s what your readers liked. 

Yeah , 
          	  It's : mafia husband ( yoonkook)  by ishqreader