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Heyyy Author 
          I don't know what to say after I've finished the book, my eyes are red from all the crying 
          Every line felt as if I was living through it
          I just don't know what to do with this feeling. 
          Reading books with sad ending was never on my list, zaymir's loss felt too personal. 
          Thankyou for writing Zaymir and kaisha, and letting us be a part of their journey❤️

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Hands down, one of the best works i have ever read. The attention to details, the shayaris, the dialogue and the emotional depth all of it was so consuming. I love Zaymir and Kaisha. They got less time together but their story? Spectacular. The moment where Zaymir's death was explained by himself, I don't know if you can outdone yourself. Great job!!!!

Hey author! I just wanted to say that you have written this novel so remarkably well—it was completely overwhelming to read . In the final chapters, I felt as if I were in Kaisha's place. I cried for Zaymir for two hours straight! My heart broke for his whole family—for Zaimah, who never got the chance to attend her own brother's funeral, and for his parents, who lost him way too soon.
          Finding out that Zaymir died without ever knowing he was going to be a father broke me even more. None of them ever got enough time with him. I guess maybe their story was meant to be tragic like this, but honestly, I just wanted to read about them enjoying a peaceful, happy life together after the mission, especially since Kaisha and Zaymir had so little time as a married couple.
          Is there any chance you would consider writing an alternate happy ending where Zaymir is alive, living happily with Kaisha, their daughter, and his whole family together? If yes, then please, please do! If you write it, I will definitely read the entire novel all over again, again!"

Author firstly the book was amazing secondly you have made me cry to an extent that my eyes are hurting now since you made me cry like this tell me how do I stop this water work going on because clearly I am unable to stop it by myself

Hi author 
          I read your book under the ministry and I love the way you are writing and expressing everything in very detail. I love your storytelling and you know last two chapters padh kar i am crying so much i don't know what feeling is triggering me pain , sadness, longing maybe ek baar na dekhne ka dukh maybe ek akhri baar use apne pass mahsus na kar pana ki feeling. But really you write it so well that I am reading this story straight 8-9 hours and maine ye 2-3 din me padh liya . 
          Thankyou for writing this book and give us a idea of a navy officer' s life struggle and foreign ministry me work and struggle of a girl who is doing her best to understand a very unpredictable and critical environment of geopolitics . its worth it . In our country many people just know about the name like air force, navy officer, foreign ministry but they don't know about what they actually do what the cost they pay to keep the country safe and balanced and  oh my god geopolitics is alone a different univers so yaah  your story is worth it because your story contains theirs life , work, struggles, balance, conflict, and all the pressure of other countries............
          I don't know main aur kitna likhu aapki story mujhe itni achhi lagi ki agar main likhne baithi to likhti rah jaungi.
          
          I just wanted to say that your book is my favourite book I like your book so much thankyou for writing this book. This book is very informative I love it.  Byee..

Hey Author,
          Loved your writing, the story, the concept, the efforts you put behind ❤️
          Take my word I have never seen such well written book on such amazing topics ✨
          Hats off to you ✨

Your story made me a cry cutie  
          I am totally lost in your words 

Hiii author, I want you to know how much I love UNDER THE MINISTRIES. It all started when one of your reels came up on my feed. I added it to my TBR but then every time I opened Instagram, your reel came up. I was shocked because it never happens like that. Your reels badly convinced me to start the book even though I have my exams from 12 May, clearly my heart chose the book over the syllabus and honestly I have no regrets.
          
          I started the book yesterday around 1:30 pm and I didn't even know when it became 6 pm. It never happens to me generally, only a good story can make me forget my surroundings and this book did exactly the same. The characters, the emotions, the writing, everything just pulled me in completely. And the proof of how gripping it was is that I completed the entire book in just one and a half days, which is honestly a record for me.
          
          Then after completing half of the book I came to know it has a sad ending. I am so sensitive that I usually avoid books with sad endings but I still read ahead. Ngl I cried so so so much. I felt bad but I felt even worse when I realised this is someone's reality. Many people have faced the grief of losing their loved ones while they serve for this country. That hit differently. It stopped being just a story and started feeling like a tribute to every soldier and every family that silently carries that pain.
          
          My respect for soldiers and their families has increased a lot. This book didn't just make me feel, it made me think.
          
          Thank you for writing something this powerful. Ngl I loved it a lot and I will definitely be recommending it to everyone I know.
          
          I hope you see this comment as usually I don't write my feelings to the author but you're special I guess, love ya.

hi author, i just wanted to ask if it is possible for you to upload some chapters where you will give a happy ending to zaymir and kaisha? where they are living happily