Thank you for your feedback on my story. And sorry if it was totally confusing and didn't make sense in a lot of places. I had noticed that too before you pointed it out, and was working on it. I wrote it a few years ago when I had no writing experience whatsoever. And had taken it down later on when it didn't have any reads on it. I came back on Wattpad recently a few months ago, and noticed my story on my draft so I posted it, without reading it or anything. I was proof reading it a few days back and that is when I noticed that the plot didn't make any sense at all. And my mindset about this story has changed a lot since then, having become an adult. So, I'm going to re-publish the modified version of it.
You can check it out then. Thank you for still giving it a try though.♥️♥️