XenLofi
I read the beginning passage to "The Lady is Too Lazy".
Immediately, I was drawn into the protagonist's almost lazy approach to death. Which you did very well. I didn't picture a setting because there wasn't one. Instead, I created my own setting where they were floating (lazily) in a dark abyss, smiling in the face of death.
It really fascinated me about the character, making me want to know more about them.
So much so that I wanted to credit that section of your book and put it into a "notebook" I'm creating on WattPad on how to write better (not generically).
Don't be deterred by the lack of following/followers I have (or don't have).
I've been writing in private without a platform for a while and would like to share my knowledge.
Esphya_Asahina
Everything u said here is almost nonsensical and doesn’t even relate to my book. Get off my TL you bot. 🤖
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