Hello! Finished reading "Miranda" sorry for the wait!
* Some spelling mistakes where made (I will direct you to where they were made)
* You must show and not tell (Details must allow the readers to visualize the scene taking place.. I will elaborate later..) [Exams have arrived.. Stressed out!! Sorry]
* Story's plot is well developed [ I love the way the story is developing. . Keep on the good work! Waiting for your update]
(Ugh! I'll write you a better review in.. a few.. maybe a day or two? I have to review your story again.. Many apologies
... I shouldn't of even posted this :c)
Hi, there! Thank you very much for becoming a fan! I hope you enjoy anything of mine you happen to read. Comments and votes are always welcome too. =] Cheers!
Thanks for posting in my forum; I have added Miranda to my reading list. Would you be kind enough to read The Prophecy? This is a short apocalyptic novel by Jordan Bryant. Please would you vote for any chapters that you might enjoy
This is the link
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1819605-the-prophecy-watty-awards-2012
Best Wishes
Dellboy