EspritDuCoeur

@Dellboy Gotta run right now, doing one more quick check before I go--I'll get to this as soon as I get back!

TeamTDWR

Hello! Finished reading "Miranda" sorry for the wait! 
          
          * Some spelling mistakes where made (I will direct you to where they were made)
          
          * You must show and not tell (Details must allow the readers to visualize the scene taking place.. I will elaborate later..) [Exams have arrived.. Stressed out!! Sorry]
          
          * Story's plot is well developed [	I love the way the story is developing. . Keep on the good work! Waiting for	your update]
           (Ugh! I'll write you a better review in.. a few..  maybe a day or two? I have to review your story again.. Many apologies 
          ... I shouldn't of even posted this :c)