TNEvans

Hi there! I've read some of your critiques and they remind me of the type of things I used to get in my writing class. I miss that kind of real critique. I would love to get your feedback on some of my stories. 
          
          Since I saw somewhere that you like sci-fi stuff, could you look at http://www.wattpad.com/1126381-the-colour-on-the-inside? It's my first stab at an alternate reality setting. 
          
          A warning though - it is in first person. This is by choice. I normally write in third person, but this one felt like it needed to be from this perspective. 
          
          Thanks in advance!