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Hey everyone! Hope you’re having a good weekend so far. I just wanted to get your thoughts on something real quick! So, as most of you probably know, I’ve been seriously thinking about rewriting SY… BUT I know a lot of y’all are super attached to the OG version and would probably fight me if I touched it. So hear me out—what if instead of a full rewrite, I just revise it a little? Like no plot overhauls, no character replacements. Just cleaning up a few scenes, fixing the pacing, polishing the writing, and making it flow better. The heart of the story stays the same. Luciano’s still fine as hell. Paris is still delulu. The vibes are intact. I just wanna give it the glow-up it deserves with everything I’ve learned since I first wrote it. Some of you suggested I post the new version separately and leave the OG up… but I feel like that’d be confusing af. New readers will 100% end up on the old one since it’s more popular, and then we’d all be in two different timelines like it’s the multiverse or something. Soo I feel like polishing instead of rewriting is a good middle ground?? But I do wanna know what you guys think cause this book feels just as much yours as it is mine ❤️

Wenclair4lifeXO
@Essieewrites I feel like you should do what feels right to you as the author because as much as we all absolutely love the book it is your creation so you should do what makes you happier with it
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ANJYFAVYY
@Essieewrites I honestly think you should do what feels best as the author. But at the same time i feel you should, like you said "Polish" the book up a little.
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UserPinklOlsz421
@Essieewrites thank you sm for re thinking thisI personally don’t think you should change anything because if all these people liked it so much and it got so many views that shows that your story was absolutely perfect the way it was. Saying that I believe it can also show how you have grew as a writer reading the 2 book, not that I think the first one has any flaws but the second book goes into my detail about Paris and Luciano’s relationship while the first is a nice slow burn. Your books are so beautiful the way they are, the age gap, the detailed romance scenes, the plot and attraction between the characters, but it’s your decision. Thank you for not changing the og story tho :)
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Nesrine087
Hey author, I hope you are doing well I was just wondering if you can add some bonus chapter/s for UY, you know some hot scenes between Lu and Paris after she has healed from giving birth and all.

Shadowscribe000697
A haunting tale of silent love, shattered hopes, and the ache of never being chosen. Kritika has always loved in silence—watching from the shadows, hoping for a glance, craving a moment that was never hers. In a world that constantly told her she wasn’t enough, she clung to one truth: her heart belonged to him. But the one person she longed for… never looked her way. As wedding bells ring and destinies collide, Kritika is forced to stand still while everything she ever wanted slips away—right into someone else’s arms. She smiles through pain. She claps through heartbreak. She loves through destruction. And when the world forgets her, she whispers to herself— “Maybe I wasn’t born to be loved. Maybe I was born to just watch it happen… from a distance.” But love, when wounded, becomes something else—something darker, something that doesn’t forget. “You didn’t even notice when I disappeared from your world. But I noticed every time you looked at her the way I used to dream you’d look at me.” “If I’m not the one beside you, I’ll be the reason she can’t stay beside you either.” And just like that, the girl who once believed in fairytales turns into the storm no one saw coming. This isn’t just a love story. It’s a story of being invisible. Of waiting too long. Of breaking… beautifully. Until You’re Mine. Because sometimes, love doesn’t bloom—it burns. https://www.wattpad.com/story/387027066?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Shadowscribe000697

muby0312
Hi author, i honestly liked your work and your writing style so i would like to promote my work here so authors like you can help us, new author grow. So i would like if you and everyone can give my novel a try. https://www.wattpad.com/story/392296299-flames-and-ashes

LorraineAshleyTayag
when will you continue writing Daisy? I'm so excited for it!

mewxnderlxst
sorry for posting here Hey! Check this out, I think you might really enjoy it! Nico leans in, caging her in with one hand. His lips hover over hers, not touching. “Because Rowan loved you.” His other hand slips to her throat, just barely grazing. “And I don’t want to remember what it felt like to be him.” But he kisses her anyway. Want to know what happens next? Here’s the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/394035168?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=mewxnderlxst

SoaringRavenWrites
Hi @Essieewrites, me again!! How are you doing? Some more questions btw: 1) First off, tysm for not rewriting SY and UY. It means a lot. I really loved your writing!! 2) Could I possibly message you on Instagram privately, for other questions? Thanks babe <3333

SoaringRavenWrites
Hi @Essieewrites, hope you're doing good :) Just letting you know that I have sent you an IG pm thanks <333
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ChelsiBailey
Really love the OG book I think thats a great idea

Essieewrites
Hey everyone! Hope you’re having a good weekend so far. I just wanted to get your thoughts on something real quick! So, as most of you probably know, I’ve been seriously thinking about rewriting SY… BUT I know a lot of y’all are super attached to the OG version and would probably fight me if I touched it. So hear me out—what if instead of a full rewrite, I just revise it a little? Like no plot overhauls, no character replacements. Just cleaning up a few scenes, fixing the pacing, polishing the writing, and making it flow better. The heart of the story stays the same. Luciano’s still fine as hell. Paris is still delulu. The vibes are intact. I just wanna give it the glow-up it deserves with everything I’ve learned since I first wrote it. Some of you suggested I post the new version separately and leave the OG up… but I feel like that’d be confusing af. New readers will 100% end up on the old one since it’s more popular, and then we’d all be in two different timelines like it’s the multiverse or something. Soo I feel like polishing instead of rewriting is a good middle ground?? But I do wanna know what you guys think cause this book feels just as much yours as it is mine ❤️

Wenclair4lifeXO
@Essieewrites I feel like you should do what feels right to you as the author because as much as we all absolutely love the book it is your creation so you should do what makes you happier with it
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ANJYFAVYY
@Essieewrites I honestly think you should do what feels best as the author. But at the same time i feel you should, like you said "Polish" the book up a little.
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UserPinklOlsz421
@Essieewrites thank you sm for re thinking thisI personally don’t think you should change anything because if all these people liked it so much and it got so many views that shows that your story was absolutely perfect the way it was. Saying that I believe it can also show how you have grew as a writer reading the 2 book, not that I think the first one has any flaws but the second book goes into my detail about Paris and Luciano’s relationship while the first is a nice slow burn. Your books are so beautiful the way they are, the age gap, the detailed romance scenes, the plot and attraction between the characters, but it’s your decision. Thank you for not changing the og story tho :)
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SoaringRavenWrites
Hi, @Essieewrites, me again! Even though you want to change Secretly Yours and Unconditionally Yours, I respect your choice if you do. However, can you pretty please keep the originals up?? Thanks, and let me know when you want to do the collab, because my own schedule is going to be affected soon, as uni starts for me in about 1 1/2 weeks :) <333