catsfurevers

Sorry I have to post here as WP would not allow me to post before. And about the story. Overall I enjoyed reading the first three chapters of the story. There were some sentences in the story in which I was a little confused whether it was Rayne or Bridgette speaking or doing actions. As a person who has read a lot of these kinds of paranormal/fantasy stories my suggestion would be to maybe rearrange some of the words and clarify who is doing what. This is just my opinion though so you don't have to do it. Thank you for letting me read these chapters and I would love to check out the full story. Sorry if I am being rude I just want to help.