EternalCrossroads123

Chapter 59 has been published!
          	
          	It’s titled: It's really me
          	
          	Pretty cool chapter, and now things are about to get serious!

ShurikenWolf

Hello there. I have a question? 
          
          Could I possibly write a story of my own one day, drawing a bit of inspiration from A Second Chance? I really do like the setup of Jay being framed, everyone turning against him in a trial, him being replaced by a 'better' ninja, being sent to a different world to live a happier life, and eventually having to return to Ninjago because of some threat.
          
          (Note: Cyrus Borg and Milton Dyer aren't the victims in my story idea.)
          
          Of course I don't want to completely copy your entire your story either. I'd have the Source Dragons be responsible for sending Jay to another world, the team would fall apart without Jay shortly afterwards, because hey! That's an element of creation leaving their home dimension completely. Lets throw in some consequences to make the Ninja suffer, but they frustratingly don't know why and would have to scramble around for answers.
          
          And then you have the replacement Ninja slowly letting his mask drop, with bits of his personality leaking through cracks and the Ninja began to take notice. But they're in denial. Because this guy was meant to be better than Jay. They wouldn't have made another mistake. No way.
          
          And then comes the big reveal of the Midnight Ninja and who really framed Jay. Probably around the Crystallized era?
          
          And where it is exactly that Jay ended up. Another dimension, another world, and that means crossovers!
          
          But umm, I'm probably getting too ahead of myself. I'd really like to make a Ninjago story like this, but I don't want to offend you either. Does any of what I typed out sound okay?

ShurikenWolf

Ah, I don't know about that. I'm extremely hesitant to use any form of AI tool, largely due to a more personal issue. 
            
            Actually before I publish anything, I already plan to reread and edit my work several times, and even seek out a beta reader if I need one.
            
            But thanks for the advice anyway! And I wish you luck on your future chapters!
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EternalCrossroads123

@ShurikenWolf No problem! My last piece of advice would be to use an LLM or AI Assistant like Gemini, Copilot, or Claude with proper prompting to multiply your output, such as giving it examples, styles, set of rules, to follow how one character etc. 
            
            These tools can be very helpful in giving suggestions or helping you finish chapters fast.
            
            Make sure to re-edit the output so that it still has your touch in it and doesn't sound weird. 
            
            If you need help regarding that, feel free to start another convo here again. 
            
            I wish you the best of luck in your journey writing this book!
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ShurikenWolf

Btw, thanks for the follow!
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EternalCrossroads123

Chapter 54 has been published!
          
          It’s titled:  So heartwarming
          
          Welcome to Act 2!
          
          I’d also like to mention that part of Jay’s biological mom’s backstory is inspired by Thundersnow by @CeraunoAure, used with the author’s permission.
          
          It was a pretty good book, I'd recommend, giving it a read.
          
          P.S. Wattpad's being weird. If you get multiple pings, sorry about that lol.

EternalCrossroads123

Hey guys!
          
          Just a friendly reminder, you haven’t voted on a chapter, please do so. It’s in the top right and it helps promote the book.
          
          Very thankful for all your support. 
          
          Act 2’s first part is getting close to finishing too.
          
          That’s all!
          
          P.S. California heat and Midwest weather hits like a snowstorm on a sunny day lmao.

kumakily

@EternalCrossroads123 ohhh, vale, espero atenta
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EternalCrossroads123

@kumakily Act 2 hasn't started yet, Act 1 has ended. Act 2 is close to starting as I am almost done with the first chapter.
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kumakily

@EternalCrossroads123 eh? Acto 2? Oriéntame, donde empezaba el acto 2?
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