ibn_adam
Salam! Don't know when you'll see this but thought I'd just comment about your book. I loved the concept, but I feel that you could execute it better. The inconsistent tenses pulled me out of the story. I also felt that the last two chapters just resolve the entire (GLOBAL) conflict way too quickly - plot convenience 101. Just putting in my two cents in. In sha Allah you'll be able to hone your skills with time and use them for the betterment of the Ummah! ✊