EternalOG

For the Black Clover readers, I wanted to make y'all aware that I've made some minor edits and rewrites to Pages 1, 2, 3, 7, 14, and 17. 
          	
          	For 1(partially), 2, 3, and 7—it's in regards to way Blake's grimoire is perceived by himself and others. 
          	
          	For 1(again), 14, and 17, I've made a little rewrite with the scenes that involve the 2 beings in Blake's grimoire. I have a much clearer picture for who and what they are than I did at the time of these chapters, so I wanted to rewrite those parts a little bit so it's more coherent with what they are now. The moments have been altered or expanded on slightly, but mostly remain the same.

AIkharo45

Black clover manga is now over great ending

EternalOG

@AIkharo45 I clapped seeing that final page with Asta in his new drip.
            
            I do think there was a lot of missed opportunity with certain characters or parts of the World building(like the Dwarves, or the deal with Astaroth, Asta's potential origins, more of the Diamond Kingdom) but I also understand there was a lot of crap going on in Tabata's life throughout all this, so I don't hold anything against him for it in the slightest.
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Lord-Kalig

hey bro, if you continue this story, you should give Blake a goal, something to reach for. His brothers want to be the wizard king, but what does Blake want in the end

EternalOG

@Lord-Kalig Very true.
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Lord-Kalig

@EternalOG exactly, and it gives room for Blake's character development, can't just slap this on and call it done. The only problem is Blake is very attached, so I can't see him, right now anyway, leaving.
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EternalOG

@Lord-Kalig 
            
            I gotcha, I could certainly see Blake as a sort of Free-Spirited Guardian. I could also maybe see him doing what Yami did and just give himself an Independent Position, not so that he doesn't have listen to Asta, but just so he doesn't need to adhere to anyone else if he doesn't want to.
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Lord-Kalig

Hey OG things all good?

Lord-Kalig

@EternalOG same to you, keep on keeping on
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EternalOG

@Lord-Kalig Well keep at it man, wishing you the best with it.
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Lord-Kalig

this message may be offensive 
@Lord-Kalig we all got things we need to work on, hell I'm trying not to fuck up the job I have now
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Lord-Kalig

Hey OG, hows thing man life treatin ya good?

EternalOG

@Lord-Kalig Treats me how it usually does, mostly neutral little bit of good little bit of bad.
            
            I've been doing quite a bit of work on stories/OCs...but I haven't been working on the stories I already have published which is a problem. Need to get back on those.
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EternalOG

For the Black Clover readers, I wanted to make y'all aware that I've made some minor edits and rewrites to Pages 1, 2, 3, 7, 14, and 17. 
          
          For 1(partially), 2, 3, and 7—it's in regards to way Blake's grimoire is perceived by himself and others. 
          
          For 1(again), 14, and 17, I've made a little rewrite with the scenes that involve the 2 beings in Blake's grimoire. I have a much clearer picture for who and what they are than I did at the time of these chapters, so I wanted to rewrite those parts a little bit so it's more coherent with what they are now. The moments have been altered or expanded on slightly, but mostly remain the same.

EternalOG

The next chapter of the Three Brothers has surpassed 10k words and I feel there may another few thousand words to put down. I've worked diligently over the last few days to try to get it out by today but I don't think it can be done before midnight. 
          
          Sorry for the slight delay, but I do believe I can have it finished within the next 24 hours.

J-town141

@EternalOG as long as it gets done and you're happy with it. I don't mind the wait
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