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@Paper_story_pleas You do you mate. 
            
            My only advice is to take it slow and steady rush work is sloppy work after all.

Thanks 
            POVs is kind hard to control... after all I'm beginning at writing and as for [...] it's my personal problem and I'm starting fixing it... also probably gonna publish another chapter today 

@Paper_story_pleas It's good, as for my opinion the two only real gripe's is that it's a little hard to read at some parts. Because there's no pacing to some sentences so it's like the POV is constantly changing or merged together that it hard to understand. Second is the [...] it's cool if it as a situational thing but it being constant gets real old fast.

@TheSmokeyCrow Prince Of Annihilation it was a fun read.

@AlexFolsom :)

@HarleyMoore379 no problem

@Crazyone556 ok that sounds nice and it makes sense.

@AlexFolsom I definitely agree with you on of I was going to keep him quirkless and have him rely on pure skill and the whole reason for the adoption with the Yaoyorozu's  specifically is that they could actually have the resources to arm him with monofilament wires and  training  as well as a friend that will act as support 

@Crazyone556 if you're making deku into a wire user you have to be careful about his personality more importantly his confidence most why are users have some have a more degree of self confident nature to them and a lot of tactical planning and cunning of how they fight. My second feedback is don't add OFA personally I just think it's overdone Plus if he's going to be a quirkless hero you need to stay quirkless.

@iwuvuhmkay12 No problem just being honest.

i'm not a good joker anyway so i dont add some comedies

thank you!