EthanWRichardson

Hello! I have expanded and revised most of What Vengeance Comes. I practically nearly rewrote Part III, and I think you will come to enjoy the revised version as much as I. Once I am done with part III, I will go back through part I and II one more time, and expand and revise them until I can't anymore and they are perfect.
          	
          	I know you all are waiting on Part IV and V. I want to do it badly, but parts I-III really need this. Part III-IV (what I have written for IV, anyways) were way too basic for what it needed to be. I know you probably wouldn't like quality drops, so I think you will come to think that the wait was worth it.
          	
          	When I prepared and actually put part 3 and 4 --- the second half of 3 and the first quarter of part 4 written ---  together in actual paragraphs, it came up to 1119 pages. Now I'm on page 1348 so far. I can not fathom how big this novel will be once I am done beefing it up.
          	
          	Once I'm done with that version, though, before I expand and edit the rest of part 4, I will publish them, along with part 5, the epilogue, and the rest of Harrison's diary entries and I will have completed it. Afterwards, the version on Word will get its own separate release on Wattpad, and I think I might do a Spanish and French version, among others just because. But translations will have to be flipped maybe. I'm not entirely sure.
          	
          	Thank you for your patience, and thanks for the amount of reads and views! I did not expect it to be as big as it is (777 last I checked, though I will check it again). Hope it was worth the wait in the end.

EthanWRichardson

Hello! I have expanded and revised most of What Vengeance Comes. I practically nearly rewrote Part III, and I think you will come to enjoy the revised version as much as I. Once I am done with part III, I will go back through part I and II one more time, and expand and revise them until I can't anymore and they are perfect.
          
          I know you all are waiting on Part IV and V. I want to do it badly, but parts I-III really need this. Part III-IV (what I have written for IV, anyways) were way too basic for what it needed to be. I know you probably wouldn't like quality drops, so I think you will come to think that the wait was worth it.
          
          When I prepared and actually put part 3 and 4 --- the second half of 3 and the first quarter of part 4 written ---  together in actual paragraphs, it came up to 1119 pages. Now I'm on page 1348 so far. I can not fathom how big this novel will be once I am done beefing it up.
          
          Once I'm done with that version, though, before I expand and edit the rest of part 4, I will publish them, along with part 5, the epilogue, and the rest of Harrison's diary entries and I will have completed it. Afterwards, the version on Word will get its own separate release on Wattpad, and I think I might do a Spanish and French version, among others just because. But translations will have to be flipped maybe. I'm not entirely sure.
          
          Thank you for your patience, and thanks for the amount of reads and views! I did not expect it to be as big as it is (777 last I checked, though I will check it again). Hope it was worth the wait in the end.

EthanWRichardson

Hey. Almost done writing Part III for What Vengeance Comes. Now there will be a special surprise, new scenes, new dialog. Don't worry, I fixed the inconsistencies, the one weird instance where for an entire chapter Blue is randomly a dog. (Dumb sleep deprived me)
          So all in all just more character development and added things such as the how's and why's of it all, less basic writing, more description, Fred and Paul get more character development, Harry and Logan have a great talk down, I kinda fixed some other things. Unfortunately for you all Ryan instances have intensified. So yeah, just heads up. No I will not update the Wattpad version. This'll be just for a published edition on paper. But so far it's 869 pages out of 1,092 to edit then the rest of Part IV (chapters 4 through 10) and V (chapters 1 through 10).
          Sorry I haven't been writing much lately. Dw it'll be finished tho definitely this year.

EthanWRichardson

Hello, guys. I finished rewriting all the inconsistencies, fixed a ton of errors. Rewriting from scratch for the most part parts 3 and what I got on part 4. Then I'll be finishing part 4 and begin part 5, up until the epilogue. 
            In the meantime, an update on The Dark Descent universe. Do not worry. More is to come. 
            
            The Dark Descent Timeline (at the moment)
            
            
            The Dark Descent: Prometheus (very beginning of the timeline)
            The Dark Descent: Carrion (Prequel to WVC)
            The Dark Descent: Double Helix
            The Dark Descent Vol 1: What Vengeance Comes 
            The Dark Descent: Cold Storage
            The Dark Descent Vol 2: The Crow's Skull
            The Dark Descent: Two Sides Of The Same Coin
            
            No, these aren't new projects. They've existed alongside WVC. Oh, and I updated things and added new scenes. Please be patient.
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EthanWRichardson

Hey. Been a while. I'm on Part III chapter 5 right now. I have 260 pages of the entire book I have left currently (up to part IV chapter 4), and then I can continue writing normally.
          As of now, I got up to notebook 7, and I got two more. Hopefully that is enough. Even if not, I will finish the book regardless. I hope you understand. I haven't gotten much time to write in a while. I have gotten a lot done recently, despite not waking up until noon for the past 3 months I think.
          I did edit a lot of What Vengeance Comes, and I added several new sections and expanded upon the story. Probably didn't need to go the extra mile, but I wanted to. The book will probably be finished real soon, in about 2-3 months time. 
          Once that happens, I will let you all know when it can be physically/digitally published, most likely on KDP, you know, up for purchasing. If that is something you are willing to do. And I understand completely if you don't want to. It's just a thought. 
          Anyways, hope you all aren't worried about why I haven't updated in a bit.
          I'll let you all know when I can regularly update the book again. No, I won't be editing the Wattpad version. Might end up publishing a brand new version, might not. Depends. Maybe you'll just have to purchase the book for yourself, 5 individual ones, and see the differences between the versions. 
          Now I know i am still not in a good state of mind, but I'm well aware of what I am doing. Writing this book down into my notebooks (page 986 on notebook, 795 of 1,060 on Word. But more than 200 of those leftover pages need to be heavily edited. Once done, I can continue, like I said, with the book as per usual.
          Hopefully none of you thought I was dead or something.
          (Just kidding!)

EthanWRichardson

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Hello. Currently writing the last few chapters of part 2 in my notebook. I'm on notebook 5. 
          Here's a new beginning to the story as the first page. I think it's good. How about you?
          
          INTERLUDE
          (BRIEF NOTE)
          
          “SOME say that people are born monsters, and that, on the outside, is believable. And I don't blame those who do. Some people kill for different reasons. Some with motivation. Some without. Some kill just to kill. Some kill to feel alive. And then there's the innocent.
          That I blame. Solely and without remorse. Oh, but people are just people, you'll say. The world is meant to be cruel. No. It simply is not. And that's a lesson people would learn the hard way. The world doesn't have to be cruel. But, people will be people, and thus is unfortunate, I'd say. Mainly because it's pitiful that people look up to those of Adolf Hitler and Henry Howard Holmes as "role models," as if they expect me to believe that! I hate people who have no dignity for others, who think that just because, they can. I hate that! I hate---
          Anyway, where were we? Ah yes.
          But what of them, you might ask?
          Well? Do you really want the answer to that? Hmm, I suppose you do, don't you? Guess I don't got much of a choice. This novel you're reading, it isn't just a story made up. I mean, sure, it may seem like that way, but I can tell you, rest assured, it is not.

EthanWRichardson

Sorry guys there's a lot of errors in what vengeance comes. I usually write from 12 pm to 5 am and my insomnia doesn't help. Noticing a lot of errors specifically in part 2 chapter 2. And the Halloween chapter. And literally most of the chapters. Will fix these errors in a better state of mind, hope you don't mind.

EthanWRichardson

Taking a break from writing. I'll get back to Part IV of What Vengeance Comes soon. Have to recover from that ending. I'm writing down what I wrote into my notebooks. 
          Parts 1 chapters 1-10 and Part 2 chapter 1 alone ended up with me writing in 4 notebooks. I can only imagine how many notebooks until the finale. Sorry for what happens in The Field Of Flames, if you liked you know who. It was a tough decision for me to do that. 
          Not saying who in casa you aren't there yet.

EthanWRichardson

Hey, 
          I know you're probably wondering why I haven't done much writing anymore. It isn't because of what you think. I got 19 pages left to write of What Vengeance Comes Part I, and then I'll get to Part II. I think I'm on the 5th chapter of Part II. But chapter 6 (assuming I'm on chapter 5) won't be until later tomorrow, if I get the rest of Part I written into my notebooks!