EthanWRichardson

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Hello. Currently writing the last few chapters of part 2 in my notebook. I'm on notebook 5. 
          	Here's a new beginning to the story as the first page. I think it's good. How about you?
          	
          	INTERLUDE
          	(BRIEF NOTE)
          	
          	“SOME say that people are born monsters, and that, on the outside, is believable. And I don't blame those who do. Some people kill for different reasons. Some with motivation. Some without. Some kill just to kill. Some kill to feel alive. And then there's the innocent.
          	That I blame. Solely and without remorse. Oh, but people are just people, you'll say. The world is meant to be cruel. No. It simply is not. And that's a lesson people would learn the hard way. The world doesn't have to be cruel. But, people will be people, and thus is unfortunate, I'd say. Mainly because it's pitiful that people look up to those of Adolf Hitler and Henry Howard Holmes as "role models," as if they expect me to believe that! I hate people who have no dignity for others, who think that just because, they can. I hate that! I hate---
          	Anyway, where were we? Ah yes.
          	But what of them, you might ask?
          	Well? Do you really want the answer to that? Hmm, I suppose you do, don't you? Guess I don't got much of a choice. This novel you're reading, it isn't just a story made up. I mean, sure, it may seem like that way, but I can tell you, rest assured, it is not.

EthanWRichardson

this message may be offensive 
Hello. Currently writing the last few chapters of part 2 in my notebook. I'm on notebook 5. 
          Here's a new beginning to the story as the first page. I think it's good. How about you?
          
          INTERLUDE
          (BRIEF NOTE)
          
          “SOME say that people are born monsters, and that, on the outside, is believable. And I don't blame those who do. Some people kill for different reasons. Some with motivation. Some without. Some kill just to kill. Some kill to feel alive. And then there's the innocent.
          That I blame. Solely and without remorse. Oh, but people are just people, you'll say. The world is meant to be cruel. No. It simply is not. And that's a lesson people would learn the hard way. The world doesn't have to be cruel. But, people will be people, and thus is unfortunate, I'd say. Mainly because it's pitiful that people look up to those of Adolf Hitler and Henry Howard Holmes as "role models," as if they expect me to believe that! I hate people who have no dignity for others, who think that just because, they can. I hate that! I hate---
          Anyway, where were we? Ah yes.
          But what of them, you might ask?
          Well? Do you really want the answer to that? Hmm, I suppose you do, don't you? Guess I don't got much of a choice. This novel you're reading, it isn't just a story made up. I mean, sure, it may seem like that way, but I can tell you, rest assured, it is not.

EthanWRichardson

Sorry guys there's a lot of errors in what vengeance comes. I usually write from 12 pm to 5 am and my insomnia doesn't help. Noticing a lot of errors specifically in part 2 chapter 2. And the Halloween chapter. And literally most of the chapters. Will fix these errors in a better state of mind, hope you don't mind.

EthanWRichardson

Taking a break from writing. I'll get back to Part IV of What Vengeance Comes soon. Have to recover from that ending. I'm writing down what I wrote into my notebooks. 
          Parts 1 chapters 1-10 and Part 2 chapter 1 alone ended up with me writing in 4 notebooks. I can only imagine how many notebooks until the finale. Sorry for what happens in The Field Of Flames, if you liked you know who. It was a tough decision for me to do that. 
          Not saying who in casa you aren't there yet.

EthanWRichardson

Hey, 
          I know you're probably wondering why I haven't done much writing anymore. It isn't because of what you think. I got 19 pages left to write of What Vengeance Comes Part I, and then I'll get to Part II. I think I'm on the 5th chapter of Part II. But chapter 6 (assuming I'm on chapter 5) won't be until later tomorrow, if I get the rest of Part I written into my notebooks!