Sierra

Hello there! I would love feedback on one of my stories! Cats! 
          
          Title: Detour
          Genre: Horror/Romance
          Summary: not the summary i have for the link but a rough plot synopsis. Two newly engaged guys are seperating and visiting family one last time before they announce it. One of the guys wants to remain a couple, the other is deadset on leaving. Until they decide, they realize they are stuck on a deserted expressway that shows no on ramps or off ramps. They are forced to fave demons of their past and present until they come to a decision. 
           Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/76397963-detour
          
          You can be as honest as you want. I'll go with ten. 
          
          And just the first chapter. The only one i have up. Readig yor story now:) thank you!