Ayana

@OT7Bangtan1234567 Hii! Sorry, I haven't logged in onto here for ages, how are you?

Sorry for the late reply, I was out in the snow

Hi! How are you?

@Bonnie1134 It's quite good! I like where it's going, and I'd like to see how you take this. To improve, maybe extend the sentences a little more to show a little more detail, but overall it's a good start!!

Its my first time writing a story

@happylittleravenclaw it was I just published a new story can you read it and tell me what you think