EtievieJung

Could you assist me with my story project?

Hi, can you check this out please.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385157823?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=OXOX-LIAM

I just read your synopsis for Shadow of the Past; the story sounds so exciting. I’m hoping to start it soon. If it’s okay with you, could I give a critique about the synopsis itself? If not, then it’s okay. I still look forward to starting this once I have a little more time.