Evangelia4

@BreSpears Well I liked it so far;)
          	But my only piece of advice is that I feel like Klaus was to nice to easily. Hes alittle bit to nice! If you toughen him up a bit to make him seem more fearful then youll have a great story! 
          	
          	Thank you for letting me give you advice and read your lovely story:)

Evangelia4

@BreSpears Well I liked it so far;)
          But my only piece of advice is that I feel like Klaus was to nice to easily. Hes alittle bit to nice! If you toughen him up a bit to make him seem more fearful then youll have a great story! 
          
          Thank you for letting me give you advice and read your lovely story:)