Moonlight17sonata
I feel like you made that diabolik lovers x reader story a little weird, and so you can just treat the reader badly like she's is literally yui, but then yui isn't herself? It's low key kinda strange, and I'm just wondering why you thought treating your readers like that was ok? And despite diabolik lovers being fantasy, it does have some real parts. I'm just saying that editing it should be something to look into maybe and maybe make it more x reader and less like you're just using the reader to bully someone. I'd get it if you were young when you made it and your were trying to be cool and edgy but if you were older it's just a little weird in my opinion and could use a stronger more all personality type reader that fallows the anime Manga or game your idea was great just how treated reader wasn't.
Evelyn_13310
@Moonlight17sonata well, u can say I wasn't in my right minds when I made the story, so I'm trying to make a sequel of it which would be more human in my opinion, but I kinda needs time as I'm not that active on Wattpad rn and I have my exams going on and lots of stuff. So yeah, I'd consider your opinion on it. <3
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