Everose921
@Zack_Ryder, Hey, just checked out chapter 25 and that’s what I think about it - The chapter was really dramatic and emotional, and I liked how much tension it built around Alexa’s relationship with her father. The family dynamics felt intense and kept me interested, especially with all the secrets and panic in the scene. One thing that could be improved is the pacing, since some parts felt a little rushed, and a bit more detail in the emotional moments could make the chapter even stronger.