TangledDreams

@TaniHanes Yeah, I get it. I'm actually a budding writer too, still can't figure how to lengthen the story while keeping it interesting to the readers. One thing I love about reading from seasoned writers is I learn a lot about style and etc.  I'm currently writing a mini-bio.

Growing Flowers has an external conflict, which is more of a traditional plot, so yes, I understand what you mean. Pete and Daisy was all about just them, and them being kinda dumb :o)-- you know? One good conversation would've solved that problem, and the book would've been over!
            Growing Flowers is about something bad from outside the relationship that they have to work together to overcome. And you see Pete and Daisy's flaws a little bit, too, which makes them a bit more interesting. And Clio and Francie are developed as tiny little people, too, which is so fun, I think! Anyway, I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! I might flesh out both books a little more, add some more chapters and publish them traditionally on Amazon later this year, so keep an eye out, okay?

@TaniHanes Yeah, I did but I like Growing Flowers better. Love conquering all odds and a love strong enough to forgive a bad past are too die for stories. If we all had that in us, don't you think our world would be better? Though I'd love the likes of Rick to be out of the picture