ExcaliburZX

Hey can anyone help proof read my story, "The Taste of Blood" later? I need help, I can't go to my because it will CONTAIN LOTS OF GORE. Can anyone help me? As I've said before, be warned, it's a serial killer one shot with detailed descriptions.

ExcaliburZX

Hey can anyone help proof read my story, "The Taste of Blood" later? I need help, I can't go to my because it will CONTAIN LOTS OF GORE. Can anyone help me? As I've said before, be warned, it's a serial killer one shot with detailed descriptions.

ExcaliburZX

Prepare for my newest one-shot! 
          The Taste of Blood
          It's a thriller with lots of gore, so, if you have the stomach for it, check it out! (It's basically Cupcakes unponified. You have been warned.)
          
          
          Ps: If any of you can help me with the gore part, please do. Thanks!

ExcaliburZX

Tagged by @Equilibrium_Soul
          Nickname: Exca (usually)
          Eye color: Black 
          Hair color: Black
          Random facts: I'm anti-social-ish (Keyword: -ish) I'm also paranoid, yay!
          Favorite color: Black and white
          Favorite place: My room
          Favorite celebs: 2pac, The Notorious B.I.G., Eminem, Chuck D(to an extent), Joko Widodo, and Frankie Boyle 
          Favorite song: Industrial Revolution - Immortal Technique 
          
          I tag:
          @vincent_susantho
          @Chrysanta_3
          @Pepey

ExcaliburZX

          "The girl you just called fat? She is over-dosing on diet pills.
          The girl you just called ugly? She spends hours putting on make up, hoping someone will like her.
          The boy you just tripped? He is abused enough at home. 
          That guy you just made fun of for crying? His mother is dying.
          post this on your profile if you are against bullying. I bet 95% of you won't do it..."
          
          *slow claps.*
          
          Can you see what's wrong here? 
          
          1. Guilt tripping, that's what. Does it make you a saint to post it though? No! You want to be a saint? Get off the internet and do something about it. Trust me, these posts are kind of useless. Will the bullied feel better? Heck no. Will bullies reform? Yeah right... 
          
          2. It's bizarre, unrealistic, and sh*t. I know a few people that've been verbally 'bullied', they simply shrug the insults off and move on. When it's physical though, it's different. Otherwise man up. Or woman up if you prefer to do so. 
          
          Look, I don't have anything against people who post this, but please, stop spamming people with it or guilt tripping people to post this. Because words don't change much, action does.