Exclusiv3_b0daci0us

i'm so close to finishing my book and i'm soooooo excitedddddd PRAISE THE LORDDDD

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when is action over done? Because I know that too much at once can make your reader lose interest. Or how do you keep them on edge even if there's a lot of action? would love to have an opinion <3

Exclusiv3_b0daci0us

great advice! thank you!
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KrimsonLotus

The best way is to keep your reader on their toes is to add multiple cliffhangers. For example, introduce a soft moment and change it to a different scene to an action one. That why the reader is going to want to know what happened during that soft moment.
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Exclusiv3_b0daci0us

i'm eventually going to unpublish "Echo" when it's time to start editing. I'm a perfectionist and I don't want to publish it if it's not close to perfect loll all I have to do is write the ending of the book and then i'll get to editing!

Exclusiv3_b0daci0us

@KrimsonLotus thank you so much! May God bless you!
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KrimsonLotus

I am the same way. I wish you all the best in your editing journey. I really enjoyed your book!
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28lilyemma

Hi, I was wondering if you would be interested in joining my bookclub, please message me if interested
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psychoticyu

Heyyyy pretty person!
          
          I would appreciate it if you can give my book a chance, I know I lack a lot, as this is my first novel, but I hope you like it.
          
          
          
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Exclusiv3_b0daci0us

oouu looks good i’ll check it out
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3

Exclusiv3_b0daci0us

Thank you for being an amazing writer :))
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