Executive Club

Greetings! Would really appreciate if you could take a look at my work. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/334326291?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=taherahmed14&wp_originator=ShMhdsmJSUMuCvJvUk9hCPWq4zPrQtz857p7T5%2Bkoh2u8lus1fdrtkfuKs5pZdI7DVY%2BzUg51pcAyHxh7oWhWjN5R9dPEe0n3fI1jAAPxA3SvUrXOAZ0VbQDo9cWA%2FEj

Hi club members, please give a try to my work. I am new here and posted a story a few months back. Conclusion is still pending, and I need good suggestions from you for the conclusion.
          Please visit the link, read the story, motivate me through your comments, help me improve the writing skills and help me to end it in a better way.
          https://my.w.tt/AwL0Cu9TLP

Haloooo, kali ini mimin mau bawain sesuatu yang baru buat kalian, nih. Apa, yaaa? Hm. Kalau mimin bilang Executive Club mau Open Member, gimana?
          
          Yap, Executive Club akan mengadakan Open Member untuk generasi dua. Open Member ini dilaksanakan dari hari ini sampai tanggal 31 Maret 2017 pukul 23.59 WIB.
          
          Caranya gimana? Add OA Executive Club, cek keyword 'RECRUITMENT' dan posting-an di timeline OA Executive Club, yaaa!
          
          Yuk, join bareng di Executive Club!
          
          Pssst. Awal April Executive Club juga punya kejutan yang gak kalah hebohnya, loh!
          
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HEI EC! Numpang pamer AVA ugha

Hai kaka di EC , liat work aku yuks.. jdi slah satu viewer di ceritaku. Ayu dong, aku minta support kalian semua nih.. untuk semangat berkarya... oke buat kamu semua.. semangat kaka...