ExiledWriter

The First Chapter of my new story is now published. I do hope you like it. https://www.wattpad.com/story/130479533

lstaylor94

@ExiledWriter I don't think it's faltered at all. I feel like it's so far an epic setup for an epic adventure to begin. It's set the scene in so much detail for future beings/creatures that might come to be! Feel like I know this world now. We know where it's come from. We know what it's been through to get to this state of equilibrium and I feel this is the calm before the storm. 'As it is know by all (at the end of chapter 7,) the Parched sun would not keep his word'...Desperate to know where this goes next. There is a literal whole world of possibilities.  Roll on chapter 9...

ExiledWriter

@lstaylor94 It's done. FINALLY. it still needs a bit of editing and typo hunting. but if you still want to help me please read it. xxx any comments you have, can you use wattpad. if you note next to the paragraph( using the little speech bubble with the + sign in it) it will help my ratings and we can discuss it live. xx your the best. I hope you're not busy. :)
            
            Hows the Liveship Traders? Are you there yet?
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ExiledWriter

Children of Eatheajl, Priests of Teajgna and Servants of Nwrva. Clerics of Tayra and those who's path leads to Saara.
          
          Chapter 5 is amongst you!! go with the love of your God and spread this news.
          
          (Sorry guys i'm just super excited that i'm in a zone right now)
          
          READ IT!! READ IT!! READ IT!! tell me what you think.
          
          I love you guys, your support is everything to me. xxx
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/128859073