GirlofCreation
Your story is great . I like the plot , and the meaning . But you should work a little bit on the grammar and you'll be perfect . Other then that your pretty amazing !!! >^< ^~^ super special awesome . Keep up the good work m8
EyaMabrouk
@ GirlofCreation thank u , so happy that u like it. I'll make sure i'll work on it and i'll try to write better