@SeanKarlo na hiya naman ako sayo suggest tlaga? Hindi nman ako expert sa ganyan cge I'll try . I'm going to re read ur story . and I'll try to comment kong anu na feel ko . i hope na mka help ako
@SeanKarlo I see, nakakatakot yung "inaabangan ko kasi yung flow ng story"haha yes, me too yun inaabangan ko when im reading.I hope i can give justicebto this.