@EyesOfReal
Guys it's me the owner of this account but sadly my phone get lost on the jeepney that I'm riding , someone stole it and I cry so hard , I moss this account and my old phone and its so sad that I can't open this account anymore , this stories are no longer gonna have a new chapter or any chapter , sorry
Hi, I read your story. I find it very interesting content-wise, but I noticed that you often switch between tenses. As a tip for the future, try to stick to one tense. Otherwise, it can be a bit distracting for the reader. But of course you don’t have to do it. I’ve only been writing for a short time, so I still have a lot to learn.
@Saphira_Emereld hello I read your story and I can say that it's so good , all the tense and grammar , I wish I was like u
