Eyespitfire

Hello old bookclub mates… if you were in books’n’honey or flex critique club or had some exchange with me and are still interested in doing an exchange I was hoping for some feedback on my revamped version of Mina of the stars.  If anyone is interested in a chapter by chapter feedback situation over the next month or two please message! Hope you are all happy in your written worlds :)

Eyespitfire

Okay sounds great! I should get to it at lunch today thanks so much!
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CrystalCallistral

@Eyespitfire nice to meet you too! My book would be The Gunner and the Florist
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Eyespitfire

@crystalcallistral
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meroceank8921

Hey, there! I just wanted to say that Mina of the Stars is like a science-fantasy dystopian, and you got me sold on the dystopian vibes. I’m not usually a reader of science-fantasy, but man, you really and completely got me sold on the dystopian vibes. Thanks for writing out Mina of the Stars! I enjoyed both the prologue and the first chapter of the story.
          And also, thank you so much for your votes and reads on Jinx (Neko Inventor Book 1)! I truly appreciate it, and I wish you the best of luck with writing out Mina of the Stars!

Eyespitfire

Hey! I will go in and drop some feedback, happy to have another set of eyes on Mina as well… it really is a genre bending book… “science-fantasy” seemed the best description ha! Thanks for trying something new in any case… will get to some feedback later today
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meroceank8921

P.S. If you want to leave me any sort of feedback (except for negative criticism), please do not hesitate to leave me some feedback during the Wattys judging season so that I can find out what is wrong with my book and fix it after the Wattys are over.
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Eyespitfire

Hello old bookclub mates… if you were in books’n’honey or flex critique club or had some exchange with me and are still interested in doing an exchange I was hoping for some feedback on my revamped version of Mina of the stars.  If anyone is interested in a chapter by chapter feedback situation over the next month or two please message! Hope you are all happy in your written worlds :)

Eyespitfire

Okay sounds great! I should get to it at lunch today thanks so much!
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CrystalCallistral

@Eyespitfire nice to meet you too! My book would be The Gunner and the Florist
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Eyespitfire

@crystalcallistral
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Eyespitfire

Hello all, I’m taking down my stories for some edits, thanks for those who have been reading, if there is something you were in the middle of, let me know and I will repost! Happy Wednesday :)

Eyespitfire

seriously thank you!
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samanthjs

Can’t wait until they’re back so I can keep reading Mina and Silver’s story!
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anshioritsu

jus curious wut happen to A Darkness Rising

anshioritsu

Oh ok
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Eyespitfire

@MCBuilder101 I guess I was thinking of working on it on my own a bit and maybe reposting...with the bookclub gone, I wasn't sure about leaving it floating into the ether of Wattpad.  And i wasn't sure about joining another club.  I am so honoured you asked, was fun to have your comments all over it. You have a distinct editorial personality.  If you were in the middle of it or want to do an exchange with it I can repost.  Thanks for dropping by...
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samanthjs

What happened to Mina!!! I just found the story two days ago and I’m so invested! I didn’t get to finish reading!

Eyespitfire

Thank you! I will see about working more on the sequel thank you for reading!
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samanthjs

Just finished Of The Stars and I am so excited for what comes next. I love Mina and her growth through the first book. Your writing is so beautiful.
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Eyespitfire

All posted back up! Enjoy the ride ;) if you have time let me know what you think ;)
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