Doctor_Kaiser
Your story, while short, has promise to it. I await seeing it grow. I see great potential in it and you as a writer, do continue your work and strive to improve but most importantly be safe.
It was a good read for its length.
EzraTheFallen
@ Doctor_Kaiser I honestly didn't expect anyone to even find the story really. I sort of improved some of my writing skills, but even then I am glad you liked it. I'm thinking about continuing it, though I am not sure if I remember the full story or if I have the motivation to do it, but if you want to, I guess I can continue.
Again, thank you for reading it, and have a nice day :)