Hii! So sorry for the last response as I only get notifications through my emails and just seen this. I have read the first chapter of your book and so far I am loving it! Honestly I’m not in the best state to give feedback but I just had to respond to you. The only thing I’d recommend is always strive to be better, if you feel your work is “bad” or in need of feedback then you feel that way. It’s normal but sometimes you don’t always have to ask, some stuff is good on its own but again if you feel that way then make a Pinterest board for writing tips and prompts to help you out especially if you’re going for a seductive man and a sweet girl. Once I’m in the right state I will be reading more of your book and I may have feedback. I appreciate this opportunity, your work is chefs kiss to me. You don’t have to take my word as I just started writing not too long ago! But that’s all, keep up the good work love!!
