The Fabulous One

Hello my peeps! Just wanted to let you know that i did not delete Karma has no Deadlines I just unpublished it so I could finish it then give you the whole story. That was just a little taste of what the story will be like.

Hey,hey, hey!  Your story is overall pretty chill. There is only a little bit of criticism I'd give you. In some parts of your story, you created run-on sentences when they should be separate. You also missed a few commas here and there, but overall the story is interesting. You sure have my attention, and that's something, knowing my attention span is pretty short. So, it's all good! Just try to fix those few flaws and all will be splendid!
          -Owl

@FLUFFYoctopus hey janae i just posted the new stories prologue and first chapter i have some errors but I'll fix um so could you read it and tell me what ya think?

hey guys I just wanted to update you guys whats going on, I am starting a new story and the first chapter should be out in a week or 2. That's about it so bye